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I went threw my sketch book from 7th grade and found a pic I drew of me with a panda hat on and liked it; course I changed the colours and all but I think it turned out nice. :)
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| Owner | Chopin |
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| Coowners | N/A |
| Board | Tira |
| Program | Shi Painter Pro |
| Size | 500x500 |
| Added | 04:34, 2 Jul 2009 |
| Modified | 04:36, 2 Jul 2009 |
| Time summary | 17s |
| Version | 1/1 |
| Status | Finished (04:36, 2 Jul 2009) |
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Chopin
XD I guess I was stretching it when I put it as level 2. Thanx for the input, I'll go try to change that. :)I know its asking a little but would you mind critiquing it then, I'm still getting the drift of things round here
, art in general and stuff and need all the help I can get so I can improve.
If I'm asking to much that's fine; sorry for waisting your time in that case.
malpanka
i'm sorry it was early morning when i left that comment. i usually critique works before dropping them to a lower level so that the artist knows why, but this time i was too sleepy XDyou should look at other works in each gallery and compare the quality before submitting the image anywhere else but Tira (this is a section without quality requirements)
doodles are not allowed on Level2- this is a board for detailed and refined works that have only minor flaws. (not all of the pictures on level2 are "flawed" some are really amazing works of art but they are there because the artist choose to leave them there. moderators can only switch to a lower level) Kaera and Inne are for the best images done by the best artists.
This should stay on Tira because the picture lacks background(shipainter textures are just a lazy solution), the character is sketchy and anatomically incorrect (mostly it's the lack of symmetry) the shading and colouring looks kinda lazy and flat and there's no consistent, defined lightsource.
Don't get me wrong, it's really cute and i like the sketchy, cartoon-ish look but it is just a doodle.
if you have any questions or if you don't understand something - feel free to ask.
Chopin
XD yeah, I did get lazy on the background and didn't have any room left at the bottom to make the legs right. I see why now.And thank you for taking the time to explain it, every critique helps and I'll try to keep yours in mind;
Along with the catagories. I'm still getting used to them and all.
Anyways, you've been a great help, :) thank you.
malpanka
it might nice but not level 2 yet.