I can do line art just fine. I did this drawing this way because a) it was a sketch I did in like 5 minutes so i wasn't looking to perfect it (or finish it at all) and b) it's hard to get a good line when I'm using mouse. I don't have a tablet to work with. (And your English is very good :D)
you use mouse?! o.O i use mouse too. wow your arts are nice, and my isn't D: 5 minutes huh? eh, i can't do anything in 5 minutes xD (thanks but my teacher don't think so xD)
ashy
i like your coloring, but i think you must lern to do lineart better (if you don't understand me - i'm sorry, i'm not good in english xD)