michelle

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I am new here and this is my first picture here..so I hope you all like it... :)

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Ownermichelle
CoownersN/A
BoardTira
ProgramShi Painter Pro
Size300x500
Added02:19, 31 Jan 2008
Modified22:26, 9 Apr 2008
Time summary4h 50m 4s
Version2/5
StatusFinished
(22:26, 9 Apr 2008)

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Pretty In Pink by michelle
v1 by michelle
02:19, 31 Jan 2008
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02:01, 4 Feb 2008
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06:24, 3 Apr 2008
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04:52, 4 Apr 2008
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v5 by michelle
19:46, 9 Apr 2008
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DreamingGirl

DreamingGirl

Tira ^^
But its cute.
#1 DreamingGirl - 19:51, 9 Apr 2008 - Last changed: 19:51, 9 Apr 2008
Kakucha

Kakucha

sweet : ) but ... Tira ^^"
#2 Kakucha - 20:02, 9 Apr 2008
EdwardElric

EdwardElric

tira
#3 EdwardElric - 20:38, 9 Apr 2008
Poli_Chan

Poli_Chan

Super art : DD
but maybe tira? XD
I know, I know.. You know XD
#4 Poli_Chan - 21:11, 9 Apr 2008
Mimiko

Mimiko

tira :p
#5 Mimiko - 21:41, 9 Apr 2008
michelle

michelle

I thank you for the comments..but maybe it would help me more if someone would specify what is wrong with it..so then I could work on those things in future pictures...
#6 michelle - 21:43, 9 Apr 2008
Alexa

Alexa

Gladly. First of all - I suggest you avoid the "dark on the edges, lighter inside" shading. It makes the pic look less dynamic than it was intended. Also, a little bit of getting anathomy knowledge would help as well, for example, her left breast is a little too low. Perhaps you should try drawing things starting from geometrical shapes, not the lineart. Practice on paper, next to the mirror, it always helps to brush the skills up. ;)

For the up side, the choice of colors is cute and kinda fairytale-like. Try going that direction, you might develop an awesome style out of it. And I see you can do well with dynamical poses after some more practice. And try to be an honest critic on yourself - try to notice what seems not right, but don't get depressed, when nothing goes right, bring out the better sides of the pic to the spotlight. And play with styles! Looking at different artworks inspires to think up of a style for yourself. :)

Hope that helps! Looking forward to more artworks from ya :D
#7 Alexa - 22:55, 9 Apr 2008
michelle

michelle

Thanks so much for the advice...I will definitely take it to heart and hopefully be able to apply it to a better picture in the future...
#8 michelle - 23:44, 9 Apr 2008
Alexa

Alexa

And BTW, use the reply button, if you want the comment to be seen by the person you're responding to.
It's down here, next to the comment date -V- *tries to point* ;)
#9 Alexa - 00:13, 10 Apr 2008
michelle

michelle

Thank you...:)
#10 michelle - 00:43, 10 Apr 2008