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I am new here and this is my first picture here..so I hope you all like it... :)
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| Owner | michelle |
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| Coowners | N/A |
| Board | Tira |
| Program | Shi Painter Pro |
| Size | 300x500 |
| Added | 02:19, 31 Jan 2008 |
| Modified | 22:26, 9 Apr 2008 |
| Time summary | 4h 50m 4s |
| Version | 5/5 |
| Status | Finished (22:26, 9 Apr 2008) |
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v1 by michelle
02:19, 31 Jan 2008 56m 38s |
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v2 by michelle
02:01, 4 Feb 2008 28m 38s |
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v3 by michelle
06:24, 3 Apr 2008 1h 5m 39s |
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v4 by michelle
04:52, 4 Apr 2008 1h 41m 16s |
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v5 by michelle
19:46, 9 Apr 2008 37m 53s |
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| Views | 1 738 |
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| Comments | 10 |
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Alexa
Gladly. First of all - I suggest you avoid the "dark on the edges, lighter inside" shading. It makes the pic look less dynamic than it was intended. Also, a little bit of getting anathomy knowledge would help as well, for example, her left breast is a little too low. Perhaps you should try drawing things starting from geometrical shapes, not the lineart. Practice on paper, next to the mirror, it always helps to brush the skills up. ;)For the up side, the choice of colors is cute and kinda fairytale-like. Try going that direction, you might develop an awesome style out of it. And I see you can do well with dynamical poses after some more practice. And try to be an honest critic on yourself - try to notice what seems not right, but don't get depressed, when nothing goes right, bring out the better sides of the pic to the spotlight. And play with styles! Looking at different artworks inspires to think up of a style for yourself. :)
Hope that helps! Looking forward to more artworks from ya :D
DreamingGirl
Tira ^^But its cute.